Comments on: Learning to draw: Original art 01 http://claritism.com/blog/2009/11/08/learning-to-draw-original-art-01/ Contemplating from afar Mon, 20 Jun 2011 03:38:24 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.1.3 By: Merun http://claritism.com/blog/2009/11/08/learning-to-draw-original-art-01/comment-page-1/#comment-1041 Merun Mon, 23 Nov 2009 21:05:40 +0000 http://claritism.com/blog/?p=344#comment-1041 I don't mind critique, and in fact I hope to get some so as to improve, but it's early, since what you see here only reflects my 6th days in my training and not my actual level. I spent around 15th days in training, and didn't reach the aimed 21. I don't have enough time right now to continue, but everything is scanned; I just need to prepare each article. I don’t mind critique, and in fact I hope to get some so as to improve, but it’s early, since what you see here only reflects my 6th days in my training and not my actual level. I spent around 15th days in training, and didn’t reach the aimed 21. I don’t have enough time right now to continue, but everything is scanned; I just need to prepare each article.

]]> By: Debbie http://claritism.com/blog/2009/11/08/learning-to-draw-original-art-01/comment-page-1/#comment-1040 Debbie Mon, 23 Nov 2009 20:56:47 +0000 http://claritism.com/blog/?p=344#comment-1040 Wow, you are trying really hard! I'm sure you can improve a lot. I'd say the eyes are the most important part, yes, but there are 2 other tips I can give you: Watch out for where the arms starts. They are too close to the shoulders (is it shoulders the word?) so you should do them a bit lower. Also, the chin format is very important. Keep an eye for it! Other than that, I must say this is quite a nice start. I am cheering for you! I know it's not nice to hear this kind of critique, but believe me, it's better than saying "Oh it's perfect". Okay? Good luck! Hope that helped. Wow, you are trying really hard! I’m sure you can improve a lot.

I’d say the eyes are the most important part, yes, but there are 2 other tips I can give you:

Watch out for where the arms starts. They are too close to the shoulders (is it shoulders the word?) so you should do them a bit lower.

Also, the chin format is very important. Keep an eye for it!

Other than that, I must say this is quite a nice start. I am cheering for you! I know it’s not nice to hear this kind of critique, but believe me, it’s better than saying “Oh it’s perfect”. Okay? Good luck! Hope that helped.

]]> By: Merun http://claritism.com/blog/2009/11/08/learning-to-draw-original-art-01/comment-page-1/#comment-1016 Merun Tue, 10 Nov 2009 19:44:28 +0000 http://claritism.com/blog/?p=344#comment-1016 I know for these issues. Eyes placement has improved since then... hair, not so much. It's still the hardest part for me when I colorize. Also right now I don't any more time to draw, I'm quite busy with college. But by these articles, I also wants to retrace the experience of someone learning how to draw and I hope it will help other people. I also hope others will also share their opinion and advices ^^ I know for these issues. Eyes placement has improved since then… hair, not so much. It’s still the hardest part for me when I colorize.

Also right now I don’t any more time to draw, I’m quite busy with college. But by these articles, I also wants to retrace the experience of someone learning how to draw and I hope it will help other people. I also hope others will also share their opinion and advices ^^

]]> By: Destiny http://claritism.com/blog/2009/11/08/learning-to-draw-original-art-01/comment-page-1/#comment-1015 Destiny Mon, 09 Nov 2009 12:33:32 +0000 http://claritism.com/blog/?p=344#comment-1015 Looks like a good start to me. For a bit of critique: you should try to place better the eyes and maybe try to work on making the hair look more natural. Looks like a good start to me.
For a bit of critique: you should try to place better the eyes and maybe try to work on making the hair look more natural.

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